school project

here is a story that I had to write for school that is about my headaches



The mystery of the aching cranium



Headaches for me, are a big deal. I seem to get them all the time, and I can never seem to get the to go away. My name is Blanie Nick, I am a detective my own world, in the Land of Troubles! People here always have troubles, but they never seem to be easy problems, so my life is filled with other peoples worries, and my headaches don't help me with it much. They usually stress me out more and ruin my day and my job. I decided to get the bottom of MY problem. First I kept a journal of what I ate every day and when I got headaches. But soon I lost track of what I was eating and I thought that maybe I should stop, because it was just stressing me out even more with trying to remember! So there I was, time to move on to plan B! I was tired of having Tylenol five times a day. So I decided to see what my headaches instead of what fixed them. As I moved on with my life, I kept a close watch on my headaches, and then I met a man! His name was Mr. Can'tseemtogetitright. Welllllll...his name seemed a bit long, so I shortened it to Mr.Right instead. He seemed to like that instead of Mr.Can't, which was what I was originally what I was going to call him. He had come up with this formula which he said kept you healthy and to keep headaches away. I really didn't think that it would work, but I thought that it wouldn't hurt to give it a try...or would it? I decided to take the risk, and brought home the formula. In the morning I took some, along with my new vitamin that I had started to take every day, and when I woke up the next morning, I just had a little bit of a headache! The formula was working! But then why did I still have a little bit of a headache? Was it because of the pills? I did not take them the next day, and sure enough...my headache was gone! So! I had found out one thing that caused my headaches, but only one! I didn't know if ther was andy more, but I had to make sure! I decided to take a rest the next day to reward myself for the little bit of success. So I stayed up late and watched a show that I had always had wanted to see, and went to bed at midnight. I loved to eat junk food, and as you can guess, I wake up the next morning with a pounding headache! I guess those pills were not my only problen, I need to eat healthy to, and go to bed earlyer. (groan) So that marked two more off my list, but I still felt like something was missing. I needed to add something else to mu list. So here I am....stuck. But as my life goes on, I bet I will find more and more things that cause my headaches. Now solving other peoples problems arn't as hard andy more, because I solved my own.

The End

And there is my story....some of the story is a bit twisted but some is true.

Does any of you know any more things on how to fix headaches?

Also, what do I need to work on in my story writing?